- Update: THE HUMAN CONDITION
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hafowler
- December 14th, 2008
I mentioned on my Facebook recently that THE HUMAN CONDITION, my current work in progress, is close to going into the crapper. I've been stuck on chapter four for weeks now, and haven't been able to figure out what it was about the story that wasn't grabbing my attention. (Just for the record, if what you're writing bores you, chances are good it's going to completely lose your reader.)
Today I figured out what I think may be PART of the problem -- I've got too many major plotlines. It's not unusual to have three distinct storylines in a book this size (about 300 pages?): the romance aspect, the main plot (these are usually entwined in my stories) and a subplot that's related, but not necessarily directly. Going over the outline of this book and breaking out the various plots and subplots, I realized that there were TWO major plots, the romance, and a number of subplots. In other words -- TOO MUCH CRAP GOING ON FOR A BOOK THIS SIZE.
So, I'm completely dumping one entire plotline, and I have to say, that gives me some hope that this book can finally go somewhere. Not only that, but I can use the secondary storyline as a sequel. Publishers always like the possibility of a sequel. Or even better, a series. It will also give me more of an opportunity to develop the world in this first book, something else that's a little weak in the draft as it stands now.
So anyway, that's where I am today!